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howardtsu
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0 posted 2007-03-21 11:51 AM


                        the missing ingredient

                              i'm needing it

i wish her desire were feeding it

but i'm afraid only i aspire to find out whose leading it

                            our heart that is,

is there a right direction?

                         it makes sense though

i'm the one who needs affection

she did nothing wrong, her "Private Selection"

                         was already sliced



                                                                      love,

                                                                      howard



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he11oxNASTY
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1 posted 2007-03-21 04:53 PM


"it makes sense though
i'm the one who needs affection"
I really like the line. I can relate, definately.

April-Lyn

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Gaia
2 posted 2007-03-23 12:53 PM


AW, she just didn't go for your style.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-03-23 01:07 PM


"is there a right direction?"

~ Be who you truly are and your direction will be the right direction for the right girl.

You write such tender and sweet poetry.


EA

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2007-03-24 04:23 AM


Howard, I love all things Italian.... you haven't disappointed me!  Bravo! RDB x
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