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steavenr
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0 posted 2007-03-20 06:05 PM



one leg up with the truck door closed
smack dab on Mickey D’s parking lot
through an open window
he threw his leg up
climbing in with riders twain
to board the bubba train (a Ford, I think)
stood there watching, remembering
not the twenty years passed
since I could do the same,
more like forty
since I had game


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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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1 posted 2007-03-20 10:13 PM


Your humor is unsurpassed.
Enjoyed the glimpse.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2007-03-21 06:00 AM


pretty cool write
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
3 posted 2007-03-21 04:58 PM




love it!  


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2007-03-21 05:03 PM


Much enjoyed Steaven!  

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me. ~

jak
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since 2007-03-14
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Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2007-03-21 05:22 PM


nice nice

Jak
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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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6 posted 2007-03-21 05:33 PM


Cute...very cute!!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

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