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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: Consumption The tarry warmth of covers spread Wrapped about me asleep in bed While dreaming naked trails of dare And running rampant still butt bare It’s often that I travel thus Deep within this omnibus That brings about a twitch a turn Unconscious of the things I yearn Surprised or not they are my lot It’s been this way since I was tot I rarely dream the dreams I would Although I try and wish I could I never know the dreams I find For some of them are most unkind And wake me in a worried sweat That takes me time to sort and set But I’ve learned clues about neaps reap And what to eat before I sleep. |
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jak Member
since 2007-03-14
Posts 85Charlotte, NC |
pretty clever. the first stanza is best, classic. Jak |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jak Thank you and glad you enjoyed. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Sy Dreams are so interesting to me...I've just begun to be able to remember mine...most of them make no sense at all.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie I don't remember most of mine either.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
haha, yes it is said, that greasy potatos bring bad dreams! But among the bad ones, there are also good ones and I know you have them! Very cute, dear Seymour! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Thank you sweetie, glad you enjoyed. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Eating and dreaming can be a real science, and if I am bored, I have crackers and mustard.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Reads good to me, I'll have to ry it. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Dream good Dream bad Dream makes your sleep sad. cheering up your precious sleep, you can find the rest reap I love to read your poems. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I don't dream much, or at least I don't remember them, thank God but I have had some strange ones in my time good write! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz A Kind reply, thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you for not passing me bye. |
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jak Member
since 2007-03-14
Posts 85Charlotte, NC |
this made me want to go and write more about my own dreams, i need to do better to try and remember them. Jak |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jak Remembering them is a good trick, lots of luck. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"While dreaming naked trails of dare And running rampant still butt bare" I have no clue what dreams mean Sir Sy but this one is certainly not boring! love it |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, Thank you dear for the read and dreams are really hard to diagnose. Most will come from problems we have and that can be endless. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
all I know is I wake up as tired as I went to bed...my mind never stops... M |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
No Dagwood sandwiches before you call it a night Sy. Much enjoyed!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sir Sy, one's diet does help the mind and sometimes hinder it..... Dreams can be fun, can also suck! huh? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus You are absolutely right. LOL |
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