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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2007-03-15 09:21 AM

Faint are the echoes
that whirl through my mind

memories stirring thoughts of yesterday
to flash in rewind
behind closed lids squinting tighter
trying to prevent escape

to keep it secure
there, where no other
can ever intrude
in those moments
cherishing you;

where your presence lingers,
your voice remains
and time transcends
distance and space

leaving only you and I
within a whispers embrace.

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-15-2007 10:05 AM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2007-03-15 10:09 AM

Lovely, smooth, sincere...

a whisper's delight...

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2007-03-15 02:36 PM

"where your presence lingers,
your voice remains
and time transcends
distance and space

leaving only you and I
within a whispers embrace."

A beauty.
Great write.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2007-03-15 02:44 PM

glorious and beautiful....
you wow'd me

very pretty write

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

4 posted 2007-03-15 04:06 PM

"memories stirring thoughts of yesterday
to flash in rewind
behind closed lids squinting tighter <---wow...love this visual
trying to prevent escape"

This piece spoke to me today. I can at times hear "echoes" of voiced memories, too.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

5 posted 2007-03-15 06:36 PM

I am missing my special someone today, so I enjoyed reading this. You write with elegance, as if it is all written on satin. Lovely write!

Caroline

He who wants a rose must respect the thorn.
- Persian Proverb

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2007-03-15 07:07 PM

Makes me want to daydream a little about my own whisper's embrace.

....jo

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2007-03-15 09:37 PM

and I too miss a whisper
that moves my very soul

beautiful gentle Donna
you love whisperer

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

8 posted 2007-03-16 01:23 AM

simply lovely...and what a great title

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

9 posted 2007-03-16 11:34 AM

Beautiful and touching

Hope

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2007-03-16 12:44 PM

A gentle whisper of a write dear Donna.
Lovely lovely...

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me. ~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2007-03-16 06:47 PM

Enjoyed...James

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

12 posted 2007-03-16 07:47 PM

This one really touched me..it made me think a lot..Excellent Work!

sewasham
Senior Member

since 2006-09-11

Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA

13 posted 2007-03-16 11:53 PM

A beautifully flowing piece of work. Very nice. Take care and Have fun. Steve

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

14 posted 2007-03-21 08:40 AM

I am so very pleased that ya'll enjoyed and took the time to leave your kind words. Kate? Yes...I too, miss a whisper that is SO very special. Hugs times two to you.

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