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icequeen
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0 posted 2007-03-15 01:47 AM



Sunshine told me that next time Ron does a name sweep, I need to retire the icequeen and go back to my former PiP name of Caroline~~ I'm ready when you are Ron   {but hurry - I'm standing in a puddle of really cold water LoL!!}



Spring's thaw has come
The icequeen's begun
her melting process
aided by many...
Blazes of Serenity
arrived next to warm rays of
Sunshine
and the amazing simplicity of the
Azizan Theory of Global Warming
has been proven
Snowcaps glitter right through
Passing Shadows
while drifting among the
gorgeous hills and valleys
in the mind of
Sir Seymour
She's floating upon the
river of perfect peace called
Huan Yi
entranced by the wonder of this
"Enchantressing"
ride that allows her to bask
in the shine shine shine of
~~~This Diamond~~~
and now flying along the
tropical *Suthern* winds
she arrives on the warm sands
the foreverly shores of
"Tindal Beach"
Then finally, the last of the frost
disappears to the notes of a
Blues Serenade......



© Copyright 2007 Caroline Rush Markham - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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1 posted 2007-03-15 01:54 AM


Man, I am feeling warmer already.  I love this and I am loving getting to know you here.  Ice Queen or Caroline you are sheer beauty to me.

Alison ... who will sweep her name to Alison some day.

xoxoxo

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2 posted 2007-03-15 04:48 AM


Now, now, no more melting. Bad enough the polar bears are having to train for long distance swimming to find a berg!

smile...but that ice thing? sigh...I'd love to melt a few cubes with a nice Scot--er, scotch I mean.



But you are right, the name doesn't suit you. Although I happen to know of a this club that hands out tiaras and I think you'd qualify.

feather boas and tiaras--you think it's too much?

Love you, lovely!

passing shadows
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3 posted 2007-03-15 07:02 AM


LOVE the way you did this and so glad to be included!

great job! And no, icequeen doesn't suit you but either way, you'll always be Caroline to me

LeeJ
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4 posted 2007-03-15 08:18 AM


Does Ron do Mind Sweeps as well?

This was fantastic and perky...loved this composition, showing the glory and peacefulness of intellectual smiles from those within PIP...marvelous!

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5 posted 2007-03-15 11:10 AM


SweetCaroline~
You do a fabulous poetic meltdown~

This is fantasmatic~

Sweeping applause !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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icequeen
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6 posted 2007-03-15 01:54 PM


Ahhhh thank ya ladies ~~~ I love y'all and had to find a way to show my gratitude for what you share here, how you touch my life and make my bad days into good ones.

Alison~~ I'll lend you my broom once Ron grants it to me! I'm really enjoying getting to know you as well... Glad you're warmer too!

Ser, dahling - I think we should go to that club, with our feather boas and our tiaras and ROCKET DOG SHOES!!! Aye, let's go and find that Scot - ummm ok Scotch... I'll settle LOL (Hey ain't the name of that place "The Mona Lisa"???) *GRIN*

Ms Shadows ~~ I had to include ya as I think of you as my own personal mind-reader! You always seem to pen, and beautifully so, what I can't find words for....and ehhhh when I came back here? Icequeen fit then. It is all of you who have broken through that frost.

Thank you LeeJ - I'm gonna have to do another of these, as you are one of my favorites to read as well! Ya blew me away with your new "dark" piece ~~ it is a WOW!


Marge, hon -- I couldn't do it without you and your encouragement yanno? Besides - I wouldn't know to float~land on those foreverly shores if it weren't for you!


ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2007-03-17 09:43 PM


This was so great Caroline.

Hugs,
TD


jak
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8 posted 2007-03-17 10:05 PM


very nice and fun. Thanks for sharing.

Jak
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Sunshine
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9 posted 2007-03-18 09:57 AM



Look what floated to the top...

check your email soon, m'dear.




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10 posted 2007-03-29 12:24 PM


Whatever the name, I'll be looking for you. *S* But you're right... your heart's too warm for you to be queen of ice. LOL

And... you just warmed mine... thank you! *S*

TerryW
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11 posted 2007-03-29 01:14 PM


Beautiful.

Very nice nod to all the great friends here at PIP.

Thanks for sharing!!!!


Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

icequeen
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12 posted 2007-03-29 01:32 PM


TD~~ {{{Hugs}}} right back at ya

Jak ~~ Thanks for stopping by and reading!

Sunshine & Suthern ~~ where would I be without your poetry and your kindnesses to me and others here? I learn from you ladies

Terry ~ Thanks for reading and I love your signature line!

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