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Open Poetry #40

Improvisation

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2007-03-13 02:37 PM

Slight tonal qualities enhanced
a variation on a theme
in cadence with a mood that drifts
in concert with each note it seems.

An elevated realm to traipse
uplifted by a subtle chord
a momentary glimse of that
we strive to keep on moving toward.

Attaining effortless repoire
within the musics' ebb and flow
imbued with the creative spark
transcendant in its' afterglow,

or so it seems at times I've heard
when trying to put it into words.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-03-13 10:21 PM

nice!

Archea
Member

since 2006-05-13

Posts 65
United States

2 posted 2007-04-20 10:16 PM

I really like it. the rhyming scheme is different in a good way, and it makes me picture music in a tangible form. very nice.

I see the rain, but am i a part of it?

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2007-04-20 10:34 PM

very interesting!

I particularly liked:

"a variation on a theme
in cadence with a mood that drifts
in concert with each note...."

AND:

"Attaining effortless repoire
within the musics' ebb and flow
imbued with the creative spark
transcendant in its' afterglow"

much applause!!

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