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howardtsu
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0 posted 2007-03-12 07:57 PM


were you cooking to bring me flowers

               or a wedding ring?

were you looking for hours of conversation

                 to hear me sing

                    i love you?

or were you booking dates to climb my Eiffel Tower to feel me cling to you with enough forgiving power

to think of you as my soulmate?

i can't believe the strings you've pulled to love me

               my soul can wait

                    no longer



                                                         love,

                                                         Eve





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Rottiestyl
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since 2007-04-19
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1 posted 2007-04-23 07:15 AM


Very different love poem indeed. Nice job!
howardtsu
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2 posted 2007-04-23 01:16 PM


thanks rottiestyl
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