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diosa en blanco
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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I am jealous of her diosa en blanco the white goddess her hands mere moments of thought lying on the air slender smile hiding in plain view eyes closed she sees new light feels old love she knows what she has in mind gold cord crossing her bosom white draped ankles she waits oh they come pay homage plead with her heart silently she is unmoved you kneel on one knee the other bent in proud angle tip your chin black cape flowing onto earth silver blade held high for her blessing she turns almost unseen breeze catches white sleeve eyes flutter you bow your head slowly and I am jealous of her |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yep....about time for a good cat fight!! Nice one. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Gorgeous imagery here, and love how it flows, just like the gown. Awesome! Caroline |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
 I could feel it was time Barry thank you thank you so much Caroline |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Lady Kate... I am sure that the cold marble heart of a statue goddess could not come close to the warm soul you have so often exhibited with your beautiful words. Such a wonderful example is shared here and I thank you, most kindly. MoonShadow . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
gentle Sir Moonshadow sometimes a lady cannot help being jealous thank you for your kind words |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Milady... I concede to the truth of your words, and bow to your insight and gentility. Perhaps we gentlemen need try harder to provide reassurance and humility. Still a very lovely write, Kate. A joy to read and reread, again and again. MoonShadow . |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lady Kate~ I love this! Yup..'bout time for a squabble methinks. Gawd I love the way you write!! ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sir Moonshadow there are still gentile gentlemen to be found men of love and romance men who treasure a lady’s heart  thank you Sir thank you Nancy my friend a bit of jealousy is good for the spirit a little squabble… livens the mood  yes? |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"she sees new light feels old love" <----love this line A little zealous vigilance is not always a bad thing. She most likley approves. *wink wink* always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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