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Open Poetry #40

No one loves...

oXKukanaXo
New Member

since 2007-03-07

Posts 5

0 posted 2007-03-07 01:33 PM

I just got off the streets of a city here in British Columbia, i learned alot living the life of the poor and wrote alot of poems. This is one of the ones i wrote.

No one loves,
No one feels,
no one trys,
and no one heals.

No one knows,
and no one cares.
No one asks,
No one dares.

No one smiles,
No ones kind.
No one sees,
they all are blind.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2007-03-07 02:54 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!

I know people are a little reluctant to offer help
to someone they don't know, who obviously is in need.
People have changed so much since 9-11, even here in Canada.
One thing you can be sure of...
The members of Passions do care!
Relax, enjoy yourself here, read and reply to others posts.
Most of all have fun!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me. ~

oXKukanaXo
New Member

since 2007-03-07

Posts 5

2 posted 2007-03-07 04:01 PM

thanks so much! poetry is the way i deal with alot of the hard times i face in life, rejoice over the good times, and express my inside feelings. its great to be able to share my poems!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-03-07 06:36 PM

Hi Susan!

Glad to hear you are doing a bit better now

Welcome to Passions! I will be looking for your poems!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2007-03-07 07:22 PM

Welcome to Passions, Susan. An interesting first write, I will be on my way to read your others.

Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

5 posted 2007-03-07 09:27 PM

You say a lot and say it well in this small poem. Thank you for sharing it.

Welcome.
Alison

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