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Sphinxen
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since 2007-03-03
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0 posted 2007-03-07 01:10 PM



Solitary Man

His face is pulled and contorted at odd angles

unnatural smile upon his face

strained laughter falls from his trembling lips

forced and quickly waning

Years of solitude have made him forget

how to pretend, and how to react

to a moments gaze and brush of a strangers hand

his heart beat quickens and his hands turn cold

Frightened and overwhelmed by sensation

he rapidly pulls away cursing his uncertainty

he opens his mouth and stumbles over a greeting

wondering silently how he got this way

he looks at his hands and closes his eyes

taking in a shaky breath of relief

flooded with bottled emotion and loss of pride

he walks away longingly and unsure

© Copyright 2007 Audrey - All Rights Reserved
oXKukanaXo
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since 2007-03-07
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1 posted 2007-03-07 01:55 PM


thats a nice poem!
steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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2 posted 2007-03-08 12:10 PM


strangely haunting...an extremely interesting well developed write
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