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Open Poetry #40

Pale Amid the Gale

IntoTheRain
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 51
Westwood, CA

0 posted 2007-03-04 05:36 AM

They walk in line
Carrying white petals
Casting shadows so frail
I can see through them

A self proclaimed
Prostitute of the mind
The thoughts grow suicidally beautiful

We are uneasily happy
It will all be forgotten
Look there is nothing
Not even ashes
To rub in our eyes

Look I am nothing
Lost amidst searching hands

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-03-31 04:02 PM

Powerful!

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-03-31 04:38 PM

I like this

it feels like something that is going on in my mind right now

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2007-04-02 05:18 PM

Interesting imagery, though I cannot venture a guess as to its poetic inspiration or meaning,
I did enjoy the shadowy mystical sense of pale, see-through entities.

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