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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: Essence Your fragrance reins my brain Directing it with simple ease Like scented flowers coaxing bees I taste you on the morning’s dew Heed you on the winds abide And feel your essence deep inside Inciting all my days and nights Stirring love within my dreams Causing ripples in the stream And from this agamas diadem Glows this magmas candle light That lights the shadows of my night The candle holder is my soul This wending glory to my goal |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a beauty this morning! Thanks for sharing....well done rewrite! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A beautiful morning write dear Sy! Have a great weekend.  &  , Nancy
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"the candleholder is my soul" Only a very pure spirit is able to do without getting burnt!  This explains much, lovely seymour! |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
" ... The candle holder is my soul This wending glory to my goal" Oh! I adored this ending. This one is a treasure, enjoyed. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I taste you on the morning’s dew" ahhh... such beauty Sir Sy! sigh... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing Thank you dear. Nancy, You are a sweetie. Serenity, Thank you for passing bye. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Janette, Thank you for enjoying my humble work James, Thanks for the stop bye. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you my Lady. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy... I like your Essence write - just beauiful  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RDB I like your comment.  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And from this agamas diadem Glows this magmas candle light That lights the shadows of my night ~*~ You always teach something new...  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...you've quite an eye...I think many more than two. Lovely poem! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you love. Martie, Thank you dear. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A beautiful rewrite, Seymour. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Thank you sweetie. |
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