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Sunshine
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0 posted 2007-01-11 08:09 AM







Their glow, glorious
Soul lights slipping each a sigh
Sun streams moon a kiss
Wolf has found his loving mate
January tenderness



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1 posted 2007-01-11 08:34 AM


Sunshine
And Tender feelings to you.

MoonShadow
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2 posted 2007-01-11 08:42 AM


     "Soul lights slipping each a sigh...
       Sun streams Moon a kiss"

   Absolutely lovely personifications and imagery.... I am warmed.

         MoonShadow
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3 posted 2007-01-11 09:42 AM


.....and perhaps they will know happiness, if only for a season.

I love these words, wish I'd written them.

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4 posted 2007-01-11 09:43 AM


Oooh, I am keepin' this gem !!!
hugs, Chris

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Carl Sandburg

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5 posted 2007-01-11 12:06 PM


Superb write!

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6 posted 2007-01-11 12:30 PM


nice read
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7 posted 2007-01-11 01:39 PM



ooh! I'm keeping it too
such delicacy Karilea


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8 posted 2007-01-11 03:23 PM


delightful and beautiful


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9 posted 2007-01-11 03:58 PM


I love this sunshine...especially because January is my birthday and I've always looked forward to it!

Bea

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10 posted 2007-01-11 04:13 PM


Sissie...I saw that beautiful moon...thanks for allowing me to see it again.  
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