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Babbling |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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I'm on the east side of the sun, south of memory lane, north of where you touch to try to make me go insane. I miss you when the seasons change and until I'm on the west of a sun that has seen it all and says I need to rest. It will be a very long night and I just can't wait for Spring, pardon me for babbling on about such a useless thing. It's only a cross I carry like all others on this hill, I just miss you whether east or west and I suppose I always will. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"north of where you touch to try to make me go insane" dynamic stuff here Dixie... wow! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yep....we all have our crosses one way or another. Very nicely done babbling if you ask me!  ...jo |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
great write, and a fascinating geography lesson...  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dixie... girlfriend, your writings are awesome! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You are one of my very favorite poets. I could have a book of your poetry and savor each one. Thank you for all you write and share. Alison |
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ChaoticHazeLight Member
since 2006-06-13
Posts 71California, U.S. |
Sweet |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Dixie ,you expressed those feelings and thoughts wonderfully, I know someone I miss too and always will , no matter where or when Hope |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"I just miss you whether east or west" Whichever one of the two, you have expressed the absence in this piece well, a feeling I can relate to. Enjoyed. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I'm on the east side of the sun, south of memory lane, north of where you touch to try to make me go insane. Dixie....I've got chills and almost to tears...Thank you very much  amazing write... |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I have a picture on my desk top of a guy walking through sturgis during the rally carrying a HUGE & AWESOME cross lit up behind him. I was looking for a link to upload it but I couldn't find it. You can see it by going to www.rapidcityjournal.com and then linking to sturgis streets. I REALLY like this one my fellow poet although I may have lost my muse here lately. It shows in my posts. And I don't think your babbling!!! Take Care, JulieAnn ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You babble so well! I enjoyed this! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Dixie, Understanding.You are still writing with your whole heart. You Are Loved. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
your writings are always a treat to read Now feel your fear, there can be only one |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
great write, i have missed you and all the others, i finally wrote again~ take care My spirit will rise |
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