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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-02-21 12:53 PM


body bent
mouth seeking
lips wrapped around strength

feelings washing
me clean

...

aziza

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ivordavies
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1 posted 2007-02-21 01:10 AM


"I might cry, gnash my teeth and tear my hair if you don't like it. But, I'll get over it."

promises?

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
2 posted 2007-02-21 01:17 AM


:: laughs ::

Does that mean that you don't like it?  Of course, I respect your thoughts -- but, yep, if you don't like it -- I'll get over it.

Thank you, Ivor, for all your comments.  I enjoy your writing and your remarks to me.

Alison

ivordavies
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3 posted 2007-02-21 01:24 AM


No that means I loved it, the clue is in my interpretation and the final words of your signature which I quoted!

Ivor

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
4 posted 2007-02-21 01:30 AM


Oooooooooh!

:: laughs ::

Never claimed to be quick
Some have said that is part of my charm

:: grins ::

Thank you again.

LeeJ
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5 posted 2007-02-21 10:53 AM


I love it to


Angel4aKing
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6 posted 2007-02-21 11:36 AM


Love the inuendos in this!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

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