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Laverne Pacquire
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since 2009-11-15
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0 posted 2010-03-30 07:46 PM


I cannot be there when the sun hits;
Hits the spots of your eyes;
I don't want to look down upon the sands of life the die once;
Still born dead six feet under;
One last gasp, when minutes are feeble;
Where we humans don't talk anymore;

Its sad origin the nettled words with long face;
A midnight sparrow dying;
Every now and again;
Memories turn into savage colors and savage wolves;
It never moves through nature;
Pushing and punishing itself into the dirt;
Of the darkest night angels -
this death has left the heart of a friend waiting.
see also: poetryandwatertogo.blogspot.com

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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2010-05-30 11:04 AM


It's tough when friends die. The more I read about NDE accounts the more I am convinced that in some ways it is tougher on those who remain here. "Absent thee from felicity for a while..."

A worthy poem, a bit jumbled but so is the subject matter, from this side of things, anyway.

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