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Stacey011
Junior Member
since 2008-10-27
Posts 18
Australia

0 posted 2008-10-28 08:02 AM


Spinning around,
In this world.
My head is hurting,
As my heart.
My soul is crying,
Vision impaired.
I hold on tight,
In for the ride.
My path is planned,
To be this way.
Tiredness creeps in,
It's time to go.
Into my sweet slumber,
Of peace,
Below.


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midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
1 posted 2008-11-04 08:48 AM


Hi Stacey,

This seems like a terrifying yet surreal nightmare..

Thanks for your nice comment, hope to see more of your writings here too

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Hope Fleeting
Member
since 2009-02-23
Posts 52
Smalltown, Somewhere
2 posted 2009-02-25 12:02 PM


Sounds like you're going through a tough time.. or just venting some old pent up emotions.

Either way, the starkness of this poem is catching.  Thank you for posting it here.

~ Previously Known as Broken_Winged_Angel and BrokenWinged_Angel~

I know when to bow my head in defeat and move on...

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