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jody5
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since 2005-12-21
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California, U.S.A.

0 posted 2008-05-21 05:53 PM



Let's enjoy the moments that we can feel

In the process of making you feel good

I am going to feel good too.

Because I love you and I love myself.

When I please you,  I please myself.

I want to make you happy while I am here.

I want to see you laugh, and sometimes

The unhappy me tries to block you.

I see that now and I'm going to make the change

I need to make you smile.


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-05-21 07:09 PM


quote:
I see that now and I'm going to make the change

I need to make you smile.



And that's a great and wise intention, dear Kimberly!

I love the harmonious flow and insight in this piece.

Love,
Margherita

jody5
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
2 posted 2008-05-22 01:38 AM


Margherita,  Thank you for appreciating it and saying so.

Hugs Kimberly


midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
3 posted 2008-05-23 10:07 AM


Very sweet intentions, beautiful

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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