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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2006-10-12 06:58 PM


I have been experiencing memory lost brought on by problems of the past.  I hope it doesn't get worse.):

I am losing time and words
Which were once apart of me
My memories eroded
My minds a black hole

Myself detached, I scream freedom
but there's no sound, I have no voice

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silient all these Years, Tori Amos

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1 posted 2006-10-12 07:30 PM


Juju:  I do hope this is a temporary lapse and your memory and voice both return better than ever.

Betty Lou

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2006-10-13 01:07 AM


Oh yes,  You're much too young to start having memory lapses.  You stated it well.  joyce
Songbird
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3 posted 2006-10-13 08:36 AM


Your so young it's probally a temporary situation, just think of it as practice for when you get old, and senior moments happen all the time.. I believe this the first one of your poems I have read, as I don't have as much time to get on PIP anymore, but I will try to find some more of yours.
Juju
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In your dreams
4 posted 2006-10-15 02:25 PM


Thank you,

Yeah my councler tells me its from anxiety.
-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silient all these Years, Tori Amos

shatteredsilver
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5 posted 2006-10-21 10:20 PM


I've always found mimes ver disturbing - maybe this is why. The sense of not choosing to say nothing, but not being able to...

eep.
Well done.

Don_Juan
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6 posted 2006-11-06 10:54 PM


I pray that it is only a temporary situation. It must be extremely frustrating to say the least.

"Myself detached, I scream freedom
but there's no sound, I have no voice"

such piercing and helpless words.

thank you for sharing,
-John

nice use of muffin



wordancer
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7 posted 2006-11-07 12:50 PM


Echoing John's thanks for sharing...it is frustrating to lose words like that.

Ink runs from the corners of my mouth
There is no happiness like mine.
I have been eating poetry.
~Mark Strand

Juju
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8 posted 2006-11-07 09:35 PM


It is hard, but Now and again, things get better.  I am almost positive it is anxiety now.  Part is family history.  

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

pegasus111
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9 posted 2006-11-09 07:20 PM


such a complex & delicate organ, the brain. anxiety is a dangerous emotion if allowed to persist too long. I'm glad you sought help. you are in my prayers.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Juju
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10 posted 2006-12-03 05:50 PM


Thank you!  I am sorry I am working on 35 page paper so I have been busy!!!

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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