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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa

0 posted 2007-12-02 07:13 PM





Dark leaden skies abound
cold bitter winds invade
frozen words fly dangerously
each an icicle thrust deep

wounded sorely beyond repair
the heart beats erratically
stroking a mournful tune
pleading for blessed respite

“not to be,” says the wind,
this storm is final testimony
to the end of that world
and the introduction to darkness

abandon hope all who enter
forget what used to be
that was a dream lost in smoke
this is the reality now

lonely nights upon nights
dreadful silence of the soul
only the howl of the ghosts
ringing in tortured ears

welcome to the night

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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Beasley
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1 posted 2007-12-03 01:13 PM


This is so intense. The feelings and emotion are there! What a write! Great job!
Barb

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2 posted 2007-12-03 02:26 PM


This has a lot of impact!

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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2007-12-03 04:01 PM


Oh this makes me sad.  I hope your nights are not like this.  Love, Joyce
Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-02-06 04:38 PM


Very Intense

ARCTIC WIND

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