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Beasley
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0 posted 2007-01-18 12:17 PM


Cat Tales

Liddy the kitty was dressed for success.
Her white pinafore was clean and well pressed.
Her closet boasted an array of bright frocks
With coordinated purses, shoes and knee socks.
Liddy wasn’t concerned much with style
But she dazzled ‘em all with an elegant smile.
She was gracious, charming and cordial, you see.
She was often a guest at a dinner or tea.
People thought she was outdated at best,
But she was exciting, and they all confessed
They had never seen, going door to door.
A sales-kitty in a white pinafore.
And a lot of customers had to consider
That the product she sold was kitty litter.
Liddy the kitty is all about fiction
As are her customers; that’s the restriction.


© Copyright 2007 Barbara Gedman - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2007-01-18 05:33 PM


This is just cute.  Thanks for posting.  Love, Joyce
midnightblues
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2 posted 2007-01-19 01:21 AM


Aww what a sweetie

Love,
MiCheLLe

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Beasley
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3 posted 2007-01-19 08:06 AM


Thanks, Joyce and Michelle. When I wrote it, I liked it, but now after reading it, I thought it was kind of dumb. Oh well!
Barb

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4 posted 2007-01-19 01:37 PM


Hi Barb:  I think it is cute!!  Nothing you write is ever wasted.  If you're not happy with it, you can always re-work it!  However, it's quite charming as is!

Love
Betty Lou

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5 posted 2007-01-19 02:51 PM


Barb~

Well, you got a giggle-schmiggle out of me just picturing that missy prissy kitty !
If you could do that ... then it ain't DUMB~
LOL ... it wears me well~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Beasley
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6 posted 2007-01-19 05:26 PM


Thank you, my delights!
love, Barb

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7 posted 2009-07-19 10:59 PM


I like to smile and this poem made me smile.

Thank you
Alison

zaaclindsay
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8 posted 2009-08-14 03:29 PM


my little girl is 8, carries her own fashion style. and would love this.  i'm forwarding it to her.  i'm far away from her right now and was missing her badly today.  thanks for this bright spot.

zaac

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