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powerxxx
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since 2006-09-21
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0 posted 2006-09-21 02:04 AM


Time had its way with me
My tired broken hands
Can't build a thing
My empty heart
Can't receive the same love it gave

Signs
And Lies
Came from my dearest friends
In the end made me unbind the ties

In a way
My empty thoughts helped me carry on still
And worried about finding my will
For now and until
My destiny is fulfilled

And still
The desire to see my days carry on
Came with the hope for one
And eventually ended with none

I sit here in the endless black tunnel above the unknown street
I truly ended up with no one to meet
And no friend to greet
I am dying under this heat
And still no one covered my burning flesh and meat

And now I can see the truth so clear
Coming near
To the plague I hold dear
The love I missed so long
Is coming to be next to me right here

The moments that made me sad
Are being replaced with new pictures that are making me glad

She is the soul that never seizes to follow
Despite that infection with in
She gave the love that made me wait still
Wait for her still according to my will

So beautiful...
So wonderful...
And so hopeful...

Your words kept awake yesterday
As I try to see the moon from that day
I failed everyday
I can not see but one moon from now and everyday
My love
You became my love in a special way

This pen I hold
Could not write the words you have told
The words you have told me
That made me see how much your lovely
And how much stood there patiently
And now it's time for me to build my power steadily
So I can tell them to you perfectly
And explain that you gave me something heavenly
A heavenly feeling that me cry endlessly

My love
My eternal love
You gave me the one thing I missed so long
And the only thing I was waiting for
My love
You gave
A heart that was built from your love
You gave me soul that never stopped to love
The only soul that only belongs to you

No moon
No angel
Is like you...
My love
My moon
And my angel

Thank you
I love you so
And I will never stop to do so

My love
Let’s go far away
Carrying our love with us all the way
Let’s go far away and never sway
Lets be happy each and everyday
Let’s be together all the way
Let’s be together for ever
In a world build from our love
Build for just you and me
Come here in my arms
From now on together we will be
In this place will the feeling we hold dear
Together we will be

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2006-09-24 02:06 AM


My love
Let’s go far away
Carrying our love with us all the way

loved these lines and good poem. WELCOME TO PASSIONS i know you are kind of new right? but hope to see more from you...
hunnie*

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2 posted 2006-09-24 06:24 PM


"My love
Let’s go far away
Carrying our love with us all the way"


These were definately my favorite lines from the poem.  I really enjoyed reading this -- you're a great writer!  Keep posting and welcome to Pip!

~Alli~

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