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WaterFairy103 Member
since 2006-05-31
Posts 196 |
~Ok, I really loved all the suggestions, but Clockwork's clicked with me best. And as good as that was, I still tweaked it. Thank you so much for the help everyone!!!~ When my heart feels like it’s being ripped out, I’d rather just put on a shirt. When I feel like breaking down into tears, I’ll smile and hide all the hurt. Because I know that no one sees the pain in my eyes, And that’s all right with me. I’d rather be helping someone else, I just don’t think anyone can help me. I’m not conceited or selfish, I don’t think my problems are worse. But if it comes between me or a friend, She’s going to get help first. I’m not bitter, and I don’t feel ashamed, But all the times that I’ve reached for help. Somehow I’ve always disappointed them, It’s just easier to keep it to myself. You don’t have to tell me, I already know It’s not healthy, it’s not right. But if it means that I don’t bother someone, I’d rather just cry late at night. I’m telling you this because I need help now, It may be the only time I ever ask. Because now I’m hurting beyond recognition, And I’m finally dropping the mask I've stopped fighting my inner demons... we're on the same side now. |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
Okay, this poem absolutly touched me more than any other! It's scary, but i can relate so well. This, in my opinion, is one of your best  Hope to read more soon.Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice. |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
you are awesome. thanks for taking a liking to the title. |
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