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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Dream of Reality She opens the door after she hears someone had been knocking Just taking out her hair and getting ready she sees who she opened to Her eyes flashed for a moment and then she gets control of herself But she seemed incapable of speech- so she made her eyes quiet too So he spoke, just a simple ‘Hi Kate’ was all he managed Including her name was a bit of sting on his selfish and self-imposed part Her name- one thing that he knew how to use because he didn’t often Playing at her weakness the only way he knew to get her attention Swallowing down her pride and hurt and anger and pain she says ‘Hi’ back She doesn’t include any name to make a point of her own creation Knowing he knew it was something she used often, the exclusion of it stung She then stepped outside walking past him, half wishing him to follow- half not His ride had left him on the opening of the door, so he followed her down Where she was going he did not know, but after 5 minuets in silence he stopped He took her shoulder and spun her to look at him, on a down slopping sidewalk Starting to speak she cut him off ‘We’re almost there, it’s best to keep moving’ He let go and she continued on, they found their way to the canal and its bridge Stopping at the empty canal bridge she finally turned to look at him ‘Yes?’ It left him thinking on how such a simple word could sound so cold and hurt ‘I needed to speak with you . . . Kate’ he looked up at the air of her name ‘What could you possibly say that you haven’t already?’ she didn’t look at him In his thoughts he wondered how could she hurt him with nothing more than words He took a step closer to the person he had hurt beyond feeling- for he knew he had Raising her stubborn chin he said ‘Kate, could you . . . could . . . forgive me . . .’ Catching all his words even though the last was barely even a whisper She looked up into his eyes, pain overflowing she could do nothing but cry Silently she cried and allowed him to hold her to him, his tears hit her hair Finally she spoke, looking up with tearstained cheeks ‘You knew that I would’ At this sentiment, he laughed quietly ‘I started to doubt when I saw your face’ ‘Well,’ she countered ‘Well, you must admit I was surprised to see you of all people’ He looked at her knowing she knew that was not what he had meant, but left it She smiled, enjoying her elusiveness she knew he saw through, finally feeling right ‘So, what now?’ she asked him, ‘I dunno’ he returned ‘How very inventive of you’ As he laughed at her sarcasm he took her hand and walked her to the benches When they were seated there, side by side- she turned her head to the river He brushed her hair back from her face and she turned again to look upon his face ‘Do you love me again? Why did you come back- I never thought that you would’ While her words stung both he and she, he answered to tell her the truth of the event ‘Kate,’ again catching her undivided attention ‘I’ve always loved you,’ said he ‘And now I know too- we are supposed to be’ ‘Oh,’ she whispered quietly, hung head Frantically he looked to her- to see if he had said something wrong or she didn’t feel that ‘Well,’ she finally whispered out ‘I prayed for that, for you to know, know like I do’ Then he looked at her- who was it that he had won, everything she did astounded him ‘What?’ the worry in her voice brought him back, ‘I love you’ he said ‘I know’ she said I stuck my bare hand into your rip cage and fished around until I found your heart ripped it out tore it apart while saying You dont need this anymore |
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[StepheN~] Junior Member
since 2007-04-19
Posts 15 |
i love reading your pieces.. very nice , and heart felt story.. very touchy.. o ya and btw.. a while back you said you know me!?  hahasend me an email or somethin and we can talk about it. |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
Red...this is amazing!! Wow, i really liked it. So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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