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hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2006-09-14 11:05 PM

you wait for him to come along,
and treat us like we don't belong,
i know your feelings for him are great,
but all i feel for him is hate,

so he's your boyfriend i understand,
and fighting like you do go hand in hand,
i don't know how you two ever began,
and what you see in that kind of man,

he treats you worse every day,
but he manages to get you to let him stay,
so leave him now,
you know the reason why, but you don't know how

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2006-09-14 11:51 PM

Hi hunnie,

What a sad situation in this poem! I've had friends in relationships like this, I'll never understand how they continue on so well afterwards...

The one thing I wasn't so sure on was the ending, it makes sense, but it's a little harder than the rest of the poem to understand at first, no offence.

First stanza was my favorite^^ The flow was awesome.

Thanks for sharing!

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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krazy 4 her
Junior Member

since 2006-09-14

Posts 38
Your parent's front porch

2 posted 2006-09-15 11:07 AM

I know so many people in this situation, and I copletely understand. I think you did a great job of telling it how it is.

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2006-09-15 07:07 PM

It's sad how there is so many people in these types of relationships. I hope your friend is ok and that she can somehow figure out how to get out of this relationship before it gets even worse.