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WaterFairy103
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since 2006-05-31
Posts 196


0 posted 2007-03-14 11:28 PM


It's easier during the day,
Because sunlight keeps you away.
I keep my mind busy, on something else,
It's like putting your memory high on a shelf.
But as the sun begins to set,
I always seem to forget to forget.
Thoughts of you creep into my heart,
That's when I know that the pain will soon start.

I start to miss little things about you,
Things you didn't even know that you'd do.
The feel of your lips softly touching my hair,
The knowledge that sometimes, you could only stare.
The way you'd tease me out of a bad mood,
The way that with you I always felt wooed.

I know that someday it won't be as bad,
When I think of you, I won't be quite so sad.
I know that from here, I can only go up,
The time is coming that I'll be out of this rut.
I know that someday I'll be just fine,
I'll think of you and think of good times.
I know that soon, I'll be all right,
But missing you gets a lot harder at night.

Those who dance are considered insane by those who cannot hear the music.

© Copyright 2007 Kelsey Dianne - All Rights Reserved
Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
1 posted 2007-03-23 09:12 AM



You put a lot into you're poems (I'm very envious of your talent)It's almost like you can taste the memories on the tip of your tong when you read this poem. I enjoyed. Will add to favs.

Write on!
Luv Kira

~Should the truth be so buried
in the endless cemetery of broken dreams?~

thesongyoukeepsinging
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 6
Georgia, US
2 posted 2007-03-23 09:32 AM


you are like my twin or something... we must be going through alot of the same stuff... i really liked it... it was almost as if you were reading my life story right now!! great job

~Life is not about how many breaths you take, but the moments that take your breath away!!~

carter89
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 5

3 posted 2007-04-10 01:59 AM


i can relate in a way my boyfriend and i recinitley split up because we were to differnt and and we each had our lives to deal with but i miss him so much and i miss the cute way he would smile in his sleep some times from a dream or the way he puckered his lips when he wanted a kiss but most of all i felt safe when he held me i felt so secure about everything kinda like a sercurity blanket and  i deffinitley miss that, any you have alot of talent please keep writing so are so good at it.
carter89
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 5

4 posted 2007-04-10 02:00 AM


i can relate in a way my boyfriend and i recinitley split up because we were to differnt and and we each had our lives to deal with but i miss him so much and i miss the cute way he would smile in his sleep some times from a dream or the way he puckered his lips when he wanted a kiss but most of all i felt safe when he held me i felt so secure about everything kinda like a sercurity blanket and  i deffinitley miss that, any you have alot of talent please keep writing u are so good at it.
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