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Teen Poetry #8

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hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-01-02 12:48 PM

Over Here
hunnie

This house,
this town,
these feeling I've tried to drown,

Being back here,
to this place,
looking in the mirror I saw joy I couldn't replace,

you all will never know,
how at home I felt there,
now back here all I do is stare.

~seriously not one of my best i think but I haven't been able to write for weeks

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

[This message has been edited by hunnie_girl (01-03-2007 11:26 PM).]

pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

1 posted 2007-01-03 10:03 PM

it could use a bit more detail but other than tht it was really good.

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