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Reflection on my computer screen
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Reflection on my computer screen |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Reflection on my computer screen hunnie Looking deep into the reflection on my computer screen, theres a window there, who's trim is green, it spreads light and hope for tomorrow, showing us dreams we cannot borrow, Sitting on, the window sills' ledge, i'm moving closer to the edge, a beautiful world is all I see, sharing it's light and beauty with me. Better a witty fool than a foolish wit. |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
i really liked this . It seems to me like its telling a story and leaves the reader to ponder/complete the ending. Absolutely wonderful. toodles, Pen |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
thanx Pen  Better a witty fool than a foolish wit. |
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pencil&paper Member
since 2006-09-09
Posts 76asleep somewhere in my head |
i agree with pen it does seem to be telling a story, but i kinda want to know the ending but then again it's kinda good that we can make our own "Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wanna know more too... (if I keep pouting, my face is gonna freeze like this--that's what my mamma always said anyhow) but smiling, I felt like this was a "teaser"--more to come, maybe? Or perhaps that was the point!  Thanks for playing my game, hunnie. yer a doll.  |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
hmmm Serenity and pencil i haven't really thought of adding more but hmmmm with a window you can add on lots hmmm maybe i will make that my next challenge hunnie ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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