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a diary of a teen
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a diary of a teen |
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nick_lyss Member
since 2006-08-21
Posts 88 |
a diary of a teen Nothing is seen; nothing is heard, Nothing said out loud; not in word. All hidden inside waiting for that special guy The tears drop from my eyes Thinking no one understand. Parents seem to hate you And for school you just don’t care, Losing yourself to just to be accepted all you wanna do is run from everyone. Wanting to live your life the way you wanna. Writing in note books just to get it out. There arepeople but you still feelbecausethey are the ones who are constantly judging you. Locking yourself in your room so you do nothave to answer anyone. Welcome to the world we all know to hate, A life where truth and lies constantly collide, Thinking that no one, not even you are is on your side. Everyone is screaming but no one is heard, This is the diary of a teen that noone listens to. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
This was really good. Heartfelt, relatable and powerful and so true. You also kept it in understandable form to, it didn't change to prose or have forced rhyming. Exellent piece. grammar and punctuation though maybe |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
i liked this... not forced, good content(ha i know exactly what you are saying) very good... hunnie  Better a witty fool than a foolish wit. |
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