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A lifetime... Four months.. Instantly
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A lifetime... Four months.. Instantly |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
THis is and always will be dedicated to ASHLEY W. !!!!!!! From italia. As you walk upon your plane Look for my miserable face. Crying an ocean, my heart torn in two. In minutes I will no longer get to see you. If I'm the first to die out of us two and become an angel before I’ll never stop watching over you. Everything you get, you deserve more. As we stand together side by side My heart has split in two. Just met you, but I have to say good-bye. I will never forget you. Has taken a lifetime for us to meet. Took four months before you had to leave. Instantly I wish that you could take me. etched on my soul, forever will you be. |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! TOTALLY AWESOME. PUBLISH IT! seriously. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Rhia i really liked thew flow of this it seemed well put together very well written... hunnie  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
its not good enough to pubish,pen |
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MixedChica Junior Member
since 2006-11-10
Posts 34 |
Rhia this is really a great poem, I'm sure ashley really appreciates it |
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MixedChica Junior Member
since 2006-11-10
Posts 34 |
Rhia this is really a great poem, I'm sure ashley really appreciates it |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
She hasn't seen it yet. I am going to put it in her scrapbook and then on thurs when she is at my house I am going to be like"Ash look what I found , about you then show it to her." |
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