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buttercupbaby
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since 2006-05-03
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outside in the rain

0 posted 2006-11-18 02:16 AM



i feel so awful inside
knowing im commiting a sin
i don't know how to change it
cause every time we meet it starts again.

every time you smile at me
i never want to be free of your stare
i just want to be together
and continue to feel this flare.

i know you love me
and i know you won't admit it
its a little hard to do
when doing so is breaking your current commitment.

i know i shouldn't love you
i shouldn't lead you on
i should let you think i really don't care
and my heart has finally withdrawn.

i wish you would push me away
like you always do
yet every time i slightly move on
you say something to make me think wishes come true.

why can't you realize you are hurting me?
and hurting someone else some other place?
a girl's heart is fragil babe..
this is a fact you should embrace.

sitting here alone
a sigh and a tear escape me
its kinda funny though when only one person knows
what is so obviously supposed to be.

why don't you realize
we were meant to be, honestly and truly
together, together forever?
just open your eyes and see!for me?

oh i know this must be real now, this couldn't
only be just in fairy tales, its not just written!
the one person that should be your prince
is the one who's taken, and a love is forbidden.


~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

© Copyright 2006 Marisa F - All Rights Reserved
nick_lyss
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since 2006-08-21
Posts 88

1 posted 2006-11-18 06:53 PM


hi this is a really good poem.i really loved it
buttercupbaby
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since 2006-05-03
Posts 400
outside in the rain
2 posted 2006-11-19 12:42 PM


thank you so much courtney!

~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

Match
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since 2002-07-01
Posts 286
Canada Edmonton
3 posted 2006-11-20 05:45 PM


It really bothers me that you didn't capitalize your I's, but once I looked past that good write.

-Ash-

buttercupbaby
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since 2006-05-03
Posts 400
outside in the rain
4 posted 2006-11-22 12:13 PM


haha, sorry, i was in a...how do i say it.."super girly" mood. sorry bout that! and thanks=]
pencil&paper
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since 2006-09-09
Posts 76
asleep somewhere in my head
5 posted 2006-11-28 10:18 PM


i like this poem and it is a tiny bit girly but it's so sweet

"Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet

buttercupbaby
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outside in the rain
6 posted 2006-11-28 10:55 PM


yeahhh i get in those "girly" moods sometimes..lol
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