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pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06
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0 posted 2006-11-12 04:08 PM



Dear Best Friend,

I should not feel
The way I feel
It’s wrong
I know

I’m sorry

It’s not like I tried
To be in love
It just happened
At the wrong time

I’m so sorry

Everything he says
Each word I need to hear
It’s not my fault he’s yours!
Dear God,
Will SOMEONE lend me an ear?

I’m so so sorry

I didn’t mean to…
At least he doesn’t know….
Do I really love him?
I’ve gotta let this go.

I’m sorry!

© Copyright 2006 Cierra L. Robbeloth - All Rights Reserved
bekahlekah45
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since 2006-03-14
Posts 533

1 posted 2006-11-12 10:38 PM


So let me think. Are you implying that you have a best friend and shes going out with a guy? but you seem to have fallen for that same guy on accident and you feel badly? or am i wrong?
If i inferred correctly then i can relate.  and i looove poems i can relate to. it makes it that much better to read!
Thanks for sharing!

rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334
California
2 posted 2006-11-13 01:26 PM


Or was it your best friend you fell in love with?
pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06
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3 posted 2006-11-13 09:04 PM


I wrtote this saying "persay" that I had a best  

friend who had a boyfriend that I fell in love

with...

Match
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since 2002-07-01
Posts 286
Canada Edmonton
4 posted 2006-11-20 05:57 PM


I liked this one,
Youre never suppose to like your best friends boyfriend haha but sometimes that just happens.

This is me not just putting "Good write"
but it was a good write. :P

-Ash-

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