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HersheyKiss
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0 posted 2008-11-16 06:47 PM


Let me know what you think.

I Remember it All:

I remember all the pain you put me through
All the slashes, hair pulls and tugs
All the hurt still aches and pounds
The bruises, headaches and blood

I remember all the noise of hatred
All the hurtful words I tried to ignore
All the screaming and savage pounding
And the thunderous thuds on the door

I remember all the times I've cried
All the times my tears had kissed my face
All the times I had trembled in fear
Feeling so alone, ashamed and disgraced

I remember all the times we'd never spoken
All the dinners that the table had never seen
All the laughter and smiles that were pretend
As our "loving family" is never as it seems

Most my wounds have healed with time
All the blood and tears have washed away
My jacket had miraculously mended
But the pain still wants to stay:

All the feelings still rush back
All the tears still know their place
All the hurt still stays inside
And my soul still quivers with disgrace

Hard words have bruised this child
All the screams, cries and pounds remain
All the hurt is locked inside my heart
Still piercing and aching in pain

I never seem to find an escape
All the wounds still leak with blood
All the moaning memories still haunt this spirit
And the emotions still frequently flood

No, I'll never forgive my father
Not even if he would beg and crawl
Because I'll forever hold the agonizing moments
Never forgetting a single tear, I'll always remember it all

[This message has been edited by HersheyKiss (11-16-2008 07:58 PM).]

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1 posted 2008-11-16 09:02 PM


I know this feeling all too well. I honestly say that I too haven't fully healed from my experience. And I'm afraid I never will. But I still make an effort to try to forget it.. Great poem

-Zach


I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP

freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
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2 posted 2008-11-19 06:21 PM


Wow! Its filled so much emotion.

"Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!"

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