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aimebaby New Member
since 2008-11-01
Posts 9 |
Im right beside your shell, you know Its hilarious to be me Its funny how people change, in the clouds. Im at the top of my game, you see And you cant stand to think I can on my own two feet So here I am, beside your shell You haven’t found yourself hilarious in a long while Oh how much fun ill have replaying this night What happened to your soul I wonder? Or is it wrong to hurt, as I so often did You never seemed to be confused as the bubbles lay flat So go on angel, explain what I cant handle Oh please I’ve heard it all before You think you’re some star? He done it better than you, he had more appeal And he kept his promises sweetheart Tell me what’s a girl to do The table’s have turned and im laughing now Betcha never thought you’d see the day Funny how clouds always seem to turn to rain. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Hiya! 1st. Welcome to PIP!.. 2nd. I have a profound respect for ppl who write free-verse. mostly beause i suck majorly at it lol... And that makes me hate ALMOST ALL free-verse poems except for about three authors Which you have now made 4.. 3rd. Loved it, n welcome again lolz.. Jess |
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