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Teen Poetry #8

"The other guy"

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-06-29 12:57 PM

Cold, stained cheeks.
Mascara running down her face.
Cold winds run through her hair
Trying not to trip on her dress made of silk lace.

The guy wasn't worth all of her tears.
No need to cry my darling..im here
But invisable to see what feelings were hold.
Can't you just see that my dear?

I've been by your side
All along
Please don't cry honey.
Can't you just hear the irony in this love song?

You went with "that guy"
Prom wasn't great.
You thought you were in love
But he wasn't the one to date.

A lover and saint
What a guy?
Its easy to be ignorent
But he spread the lie that was easy to buy.

What a fake? But he was "your guy"
Its not easy being your secret lover when your invisable half the time.
No use in saying how I feel.. your too caugh up in his beauty.
There still is no reason to this rhyme..

"Sorry guys. I've been gone for awhile and my poetic mind still hasn't kicked into gear lol
But I'm glad to be back though!"

~Zach~

But of the tree of knowledge of good and evil,
thou shalt not eat of it;
for in the day that thou eatest thereof
thou shalt surely die.

Genesis

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-06-29 08:02 PM

yeah.. this poem isn't my best at the moment.. stupid writers block!! Grr! lol

But of the tree of knowledge of good and evil,
thou shalt not eat of it;
for in the day that thou eatest thereof
thou shalt surely die.

Genesis

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

2 posted 2008-07-01 10:25 AM

to be honest zach made me think of a situation i been in and i really related to this poem. very nicely done.

i'm lost and going nowhere

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

3 posted 2008-07-01 10:40 AM

that i quite alright i have not been in for a while either i am just so busy its no funny. but great write seriously i enjoyed it!!

keep up the writing.

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