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Answer to My Life
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Answer to My Life |
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spiderilia Junior Member
since 2008-04-24
Posts 21Israel |
well hi all... if anyone remembers me... just wanted to say that this one is not really a poem... its a kind of a thoughts that I had when I was down couple a days ago, and I would like to share them... Answer to My Life I feel i fall Ive lost control I feel like someone here just stole my love, my life, and my young soul and only thing that could have made me whole was you its true I still have memories in which I flew but there's too few... there's only one thing that I want to do... I open up my deck; I get a gun; I check it up; and load it too... "I never chose to live this life! I never chose to be so blue..." "Ive lost myself and now the hell with you!" "its all because of you!" "Its all; because of you!" my pulse is beating faster now, thats it this room, a stain of blood, one bullet and one hit Im opening my mouth, there goes the gun, a perfect fit only one thought:"to die! my life right now? dont worth a spit!" I close my eyes and think thats it! thats it... thats it! ... I pull the gun out, put it back back to its place, back to the deck I move my hands down to my neck I look around, see only black dont understand... Im thinking what the heck? "to end my life? is that my right? and who to blame Ive never put a fight? and maybe all my life is just a test to test my might? to leave alone, in dark, and have no light? and have no light? to smile and laugh in this eternal, terrifying, night... I choose to live and not to die although my life whs never sweet like pie my world just broke down in my eye Im reaching my hands to the sky... Im crying out, Im shouting "Why?!" "God why?!" "For what?!" and as an answer ... silence ... I hope you had the time to read it all... as always, waiting for replies... |
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eternally_singing Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 123PA, United States |
wow... first word that came to my mind. Spectacularly phrased. Wonderful job! |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
it sooo is a poem lol and yessssss I rememer you... man its been awhile!!!1 good to have you back  great poem i love it Krysti |
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