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Beautifully Broken
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Beautifully Broken |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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I’m beautifully broken So prettily torn up inside Everything you’ll never say Makes me cry I must be so stupid To let you make me feel so bad And then you make me mad You make me sad… And I cry Iridescent tears in the pale moonlight Lying in the dark Wishing for the comfort of your arms That’ll never come I don’t know if I’d wish for time undone But you’ll never know That I ever felt this way Beautifully broken So prettily torn up inside Crying iridescent tears in the pale moonlight Lying in the dark Wishing for the warmth of your arms That’ll never come Not wishing for time undone And I don’t know why I cry for you I don’t know why I feel I need you I don’t know why I can’t go a day Without talking to you Seeing your face Being beautifully broken So prettily torn up inside Didn’t know it would hurt this bad When I'm forced to lie Telling them I don’t love you every day Looking them in the eyes Saying it to their face Beautifully broken So prettily torn up inside If you asked me if I loved you I’m sure I’d lie And I don’t know why I’d choose to be Beautifully Broken [This message has been edited by pen&paper (05-27-2008 05:50 PM).] |
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reddevil013 Junior Member
since 2008-04-26
Posts 12ON, Canada |
I really loved the one sentence: `Iridescent tears in the pale moonlight.` It gave a really strong image. Very powerful emotions overall. R.D |
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