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powerxxx
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since 2006-09-21
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0 posted 2006-10-23 10:58 AM


Love our fiction
Love the source of our addiction
Our hearts resurrection
And the feeling that kept us building our love in perfection

The love that's always there
The feeling that's held by her, that gave me the loving care

The love is growing between us more
Each time runs to our arms
To open love's gate and door
To each of our hearts
That both us strongly adore

Together we prayed for our grace
And I hoped
For her to be my shining trace
To be my undying beautiful case
And her my moon light loving face
To last forever

Each time we sit together
We speak of our dreams
To fly
Up high
In the un-ending sky
Away from this painful world and not wonder why
So our love would never die
Our love to remain true with out a lie
For us to never unbind the tie
And for eternity not to painfully cry
Together to never let our loving words disappear in a paper
Like the weather's invisible vapor
We are each others savor

You
My love it has and still is always you
My angelic view
And your warming smile that’s always new
I Love You

MY joyful dream
My love that was always clear
And the only one I ever held so dear
Come here my love, come here, run to my arms
There is nothing fear
I don't want to see your tear every day, month and year
So come to me, tell me your fear
I am here so let me see and hear
Your every call, scream and tear
Just hurry to me, I am waiting here
For you to be with me
Because in my heart you and I were meant to be
In the blue sky together as birds we are free
And to love each other under the colorful tree
Together just you and me
Forever we will be

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2006-10-24 12:15 PM


Love our fiction
Love the source of our addiction

very nice beggining, added to the strength of the poem...
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334
California
2 posted 2006-10-24 09:24 AM


confused, its irregular, fiction means not true and you are taking about the strength of ur love?
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