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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2008-05-15 04:34 AM



Never thought i'd fall for you
thought all you were was fun
but everytime you are around me
i feel myself coming undone

you were just another one night stand
i told myself the next day
but over and over i found
myself remembering play by play

i never expected you to call
even though i waited by the phone
and after a week or so
i was ok with being alone

But i never quite got over
how i fell for a one night stand
and how i memorized your movements
as if it was the back of my hand

never again will i do this
i've got to be strong
cos love is just a waste of time
and its always time to move on.



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Bahigano
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1 posted 2008-05-15 02:07 PM


Hey,
    I've never gone through that personally but my mom has she has a nack at having one night stands but in her last one she got prego. so yeah i kinda get it. It sucks but i really liked your poem.
love
Lea

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2 posted 2008-05-15 06:10 PM


ahh hunnie, i'm so sorry. Hope that all is better.

-Kate <3

I live in a Bella world. only everyone is blindingly human . . .

Earl Robertson
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3 posted 2008-05-15 07:00 PM


I'm sorry. But you know love isn't a waste, you just have to be pateint.
Good write by the way.

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

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4 posted 2008-05-15 07:11 PM


Aw im sorry this has happen to you.. But Earl's right.. love isn't a waste of time just it hasn't happen to you quite yet.. hold on.. some guy out there is the right on efor you.

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

Clockwork_Orange
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5 posted 2008-05-15 08:15 PM


had lots of those...none like this, but i can sort of relate. very nice write.
Mexican Cutie
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6 posted 2008-05-15 11:59 PM


hey i really loved ur poem! Don't worry just be patient and u'll find mister right.

Mexican~Cutie

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