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maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2008-03-30 11:08 PM

HEY THIS IS MY OTHER POEM I HAVENT ROTE POEMS IN A LONG TIME AND THIS IS A RHYMING ONE TOO SO PLZ TELL ME IF THIS POEM IS GOOD OR NOT OR IF IT FLOWS OR NOT THANKS BY THE WAY ENJOY THE READ

i wish i could get over you
i wish i could let go of you
but i dont know why i cant
all i can do is cry and repent
it was such a mistake of loving you
and i shall fake this love that i have for you
but all i could do is lie about it
all i could do is deny about it
I just wish u felt the same way
I wish my heart never melt in this way
It just that this love for you cant die
It just causes me to cry
All I want to do is be with you
But you don’t have a clue of how much I want to be with you
Of how much I love you
I wish my heart never broke into 2
I wish you just loved me too
But I guess my dreams got shattered
But I wish to you my feelings mattered
But the sad thing is I cant get over you
I cant let go of you
I cant forget you
All I can do is regret about you
I just want to be with you
I just want you to see the love that I have for you
You’re the only one for me
Who causes me to be free
You’re the only one that’s mine
Who makes me to shine
You’re the only one who makes me fly
When I stare into your eyes
You’re the only one who I love
You’re the only one who I cant shove
Gosh I never fell in love with you
Gosh I could tell you how I feel about you
But I just cant
All it will make me do is cry and repent
All I can do is wait
All I can do is to have faith
All I can do is to hope
All I can do is to cope
All I can do is to cope with this pain
Which is causing me to go insane
All I can do is leave these feelings inside
The feelings that I cant leave behind
I wish you could understand
I wish you could comprehend
Because you’re the only one who is my friend
A friend who I started to love
A friend who I cant let go of
You’re a friend who makes me a complete whole
You’re a friend who is my soul
It just hurts me so much
That I just want to feel your touch
I wish I was in your arms
Because you’re the one who brought me into your charms
I just wish I could get over you
I wish I could let go of you
But I don’t know y I cant
All I can do is cry and repent
It was such a mistake of loving you
And I shall fake this love that I have for you
I just wish I could get over you
I wish I could let go of you

BY MEEEE

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

1 posted 2008-03-31 06:29 PM

HEY CAN SOMONE READ THIS AND GIVE ME A TITLE PLZZZ

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-03-31 07:38 PM

Nice poem.. maybe you could call it "trying to move on" well maybe not i dont know...

JJ

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

3 posted 2008-03-31 08:32 PM

thanks

imsimplyme
Junior Member

since 2008-04-01

Posts 16
California

4 posted 2008-04-01 12:41 PM

thats was a really awesome poem

"cant let go" or something like that would be a good title maybe. but the one the other person said is good too

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

5 posted 2008-04-01 01:22 PM

"The Mystic Wishes Of A Broken Heart"

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

rockangel_gv
Junior Member

since 2008-03-29

Posts 43

6 posted 2008-04-01 02:20 PM

realy great poem, I like it a lot

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

7 posted 2008-04-01 04:13 PM

thank u so much hehe

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