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Teen Poetry #8

at the feet of fate

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-02-28 11:19 PM

{{would this be considered dark??}}

The pain we feel,
the blows we take.
They will soon all
be to much to bare,
dragging us down
with them.
Letting go, allowing
me to fall. This is
how I live my last
days.

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (02-29-2008 06:06 PM).]

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-05-19 09:10 PM

No i wouldn't think as this as dark.. metaphoricly its not dark.. Great write!

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-05-19 10:09 PM

Good write! (and no this is not realy dark)

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

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