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Teen Poetry #8

hope

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

0 posted 2008-02-23 12:14 PM

the world is blurred,
where am i?
do i really care?
simple word
you spoke to me
echo in my head,
you knew my name.
i've let go of
any spark of hope.
hope to love,
to find real joy,
hope of finding
my place in the world.
it will never
be with you,
though we used
to hope for more.

"i know the plans i have for you,
plans to give you hope and a futur."

is there any
hope left
for us to hope
he'll keep his promise?

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-02-23 12:56 PM

great write...lots of people ask this question mostly in their heads...and if this poem is about you i have to say there is hope and just to let you know God loves you so much!! hopeing to read more

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-02-23 03:03 PM

i fully agree with hiddensmiles. God does love you so much!! And there is always hope. Even though its hard to find sometimes. It always shows up when you least expect it.

Hopefully that was of any help.

Cheeer up things will get better!

~Zach~

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

3 posted 2008-02-23 03:17 PM

I like the poems

xoxoxox-star

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-02-24 10:09 AM

Enjoyed the Write!

ARCTIC WIND

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