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aliway
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With in your eyes

0 posted 2008-01-29 02:31 PM


You wonder why
It’s because of you
Are you happy now?
I’m broken down
Your plan is done
I trust no one

You side you would hold my hand
And help me throw the pain ahead
But that convert was never found
Instead you where the one to push me to the ground

I’m screaming now
Just running along
Soon to be crying aloud
Searching arrowed
Falling to the ground
Alive but not found  

Your lying, your fighting, dishonest, distrusting
I’m lying on the ground with pain over whelming
Thinking to my self ho could you’ve been so charming
The thought I may still care for you is still so alarming

The love you cant have lasts the longest, feels the strongest, and hurts the most

© Copyright 2008 Leah S. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-01-29 10:56 PM


Leah great poem .. I don't think I have seen you around in teen before.. if that iz the case Welcome to Teen if not I am sorry I have missed your poems
Krysti

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2 posted 2008-01-30 05:00 PM


Thinking to my self ho could you’ve been so charming
The thought I may still care for you is still so alarming

ha, it's funny the ways that love waxes and wanes. you should hear my story- lol, you might just die . . .

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

aliway
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With in your eyes
3 posted 2008-01-30 07:55 PM


i would love to hear your story Kate if you ever want to tell it
XxForever.BrokenxX
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4 posted 2008-01-31 05:40 PM


I love this poem, I may not be able to relate to the exact situation but I do know how it feels to not trust anyone like that.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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