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rebel~angel
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0 posted 2008-01-20 10:42 PM


They call her things
like dork, and dweeb
good-for-nothing,
slut.
She's all alone,
she has no friends,
no one to notice,
but
beneath the shell,
behind the dark clothes,
under her skin, is
pain.
They seem to think she's deaf,
they act as though she's blind,
when they notice her
at all.
But they'll notice
they'll realize their mistake
when she finally cracks
and breaks.
And nobody knows
that in a box in her room
are some letters and
a gun.
She's planned it all already.
Everything's ready to go.
When she gets home tonight,
she'll do it.
She doubts anyone will notice
the blood on the floor.
It's not like anyone's ever
home.

it isn't about me, or anyone i know...just an almost random thing i had the urge to write.

Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming.
-Elizabeth Haydon, Requiem for the Sun

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rebelangelv
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1 posted 2008-01-21 12:16 PM


wow girl that was super deep, but i absolutely loved it, i think its going in the library... great job !

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2008-01-21 01:10 AM


wow loved this great write
Krysti

rebel~angel
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since 2006-06-20
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3 posted 2008-01-21 05:24 PM


thanks!  glad to know someone likes the stuff i write...

Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming.
-Elizabeth Haydon, Requiem for the Sun

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