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rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

0 posted 2008-01-05 07:37 PM

she is the girl you see
who looks so tough and true
but inside shes burning
those that care are few

hiding behind her creation
she builds up walls of hate
in a useless effort to not feel
the pain her mind cannot erase

she had been through a lot
and hasnt broken down by now
because letting go through a pool of tears
she does not know how

so inside anger rules her
conquers all her fears
but inside its empty
eating away her life for years

shes not accusedomed to people caring
so she always stays in sin
and the one person who actually wants to help
will never be let in

how will this girl end up?
where is she going to?
why dont you tell me my friend
because this hurting girl is you

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2008-01-05 08:01 PM

leah leah leah, you're really really growingon me, ya know that? lol. beautifully sad, i loved it to pieces. i understand that, but i myself am a person who can not hold a grudge or anger for more than 3 days at most, it's just too much effort, (3 is a huge record for me, the norm for me is a half a day)anyways, enough of my personal life, this was a treat to read, thanks for the share.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

2 posted 2008-01-05 08:04 PM

haha thank you kate! youre growing me too

lol <3 n e who thats great to hear that u personally dont consume anger in ur heart because it is a road str8 to destruction and it will just make you so unhappy. ive seen it firsthand and i know i never want to walk that road. lol but thanks again!

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

3 posted 2008-01-05 08:09 PM

it was alright and good start but it was very disjointed from line to line

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

4 posted 2008-01-05 08:10 PM

really u think so?
n e ideas to make it better?

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

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