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Elias Nevermore
Member

since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

0 posted 2007-12-03 12:56 PM

This is my first song I have written down. Hope you guys like it.

AWAKEN

In the darkness,
your heart continues to wander

There I shall find you
living amongst the shadows

Let me awaken you to the world
and open up your eyes to the light
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CHORUS

I want to save you from this life
and lead you somewhere else
where we can be together
let me take you away from this hell

I want you to be alright
right now your lost inside your own mind
Let me help you find wbo you really are
Let me save you from yourself
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I know you have been in sorrowful state
just wasting away into the nothingness i now see

I want to make you whol again
i just want to be you friend

Let me take you out of the darkness
and allow you to become alive again'
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CHORUS
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Awaken your heart to me, Awaken your heart to me
Awaken your mind to me, Awaken your mind to me
Awaken your soul to me, Awaken your soul to me

Wake up from the nightmare known as your life
Fall into my waiting arms, let me make things right
I will save you from this LIFEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
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CHORUS
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Let me just save you from yourself, please stop your crying....

sexykitten15
Junior Member

since 2007-07-22

Posts 34

1 posted 2007-12-03 06:21 PM

"Wake up from the nightmare known as your life
Fall into my waiting arms, let me make things right"

That part really touched me!

WOW i loved this its amazing!
I can relate to it soo much right now!

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-12-04 12:09 PM

Let me save you from yourself~

Loved this a lot. especially this line

Krysti

HoW_cOuLd_YoU_LeAvE_mE
New Member

since 2007-12-02

Posts 4
Georgia

3 posted 2007-12-05 09:27 PM

"Let me help you find wbo you really are
Let me save you from yourself"
"I know you have been in sorrowful state
just wasting away into the nothingness i now see"
"Let me take you out of the darkness
and allow you to become alive again"
These were my favorite lines in the song.

This poem touched me so deeply..... you have no many times i wish for this. Great job.... i LOVED this. i could feel every emotion while i was reading it. Keep writing! :P

This angel has fallen
Her white wings went black
She is falling....
From heaven to hell
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

4 posted 2007-12-09 08:24 AM

ahh it was soooooo cute! ummmm i hope that i marry a poet, i would love it for someone to make songs and poems for me, it's soo cute!!!!!!!! and your piece was wonderful!!!!! adorable. i really liked it. great song, hope that maybe i can hear the music to it.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

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