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hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2006-09-30 12:25 PM

I thought I was finally getting better,
oh, how bright those days have been,
laughing and talking at supper,
and then today it happened, I wish I could have seen,

I've gone back to being depressed,
I acually thought I was ok this time,
and I could forget this whole mess,
but I can't trust my hopes worth a dime,

tomorrow when you see my blooshot eyes,
you'll think, 'she must have had a rough night',
you all thought my life was perfect,
now do you see me in a different light?

my life isn't as bad as it seems,
i just can't find happy these days,
it's like i'm blind and cannot see,
my life is in a cloudy haze,

tomorrow I could feel normal,
and act just like I used to,
or I could be as bad as now,
my thoughts and feelings askew,
and hurt for no reason like I always do.

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

NCCXC86
Junior Member

since 2006-09-25

Posts 18
Michigan

1 posted 2006-09-30 12:36 PM

This is wonderful. It's alot like how I feel, with the rollercoaster of emotions that can come during a day. No matter how good the day is, sometimes I can't help but slide back into the depression. This poem touched me. Keep up the amazing work!

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

2 posted 2006-09-30 12:42 PM

I've gone back to being depressed,
I acually thought I was ok this time,
and I could forget this whole mess,
but I can't trust my hopes worth a dime,

that was my fave. part...i really like this one...i know exactly what your poem is saying, i feel the same way right now.

overall, i loved it. <3

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-09-30 01:29 AM

Hi hunnie,

I can really relate to this poem and in being able to do so it makes this one of my favorites by you.

This part-"tomorrow I could feel normal,
and act just like I used to,
or I could be as bad as now,
my thoughts and feelings askew,
and hurt for no reason like I always do"

was one of my favorites. I get this emotioanl rollercoaster feeling all the time and I think you described it just right.

Thank you so much for sharing more of your work, I always enjoy reading what you post

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2006-09-30 06:26 PM

I'm sorry to hear that you're feeling depressed, but stay strong. Everyone feels like this at one time or another.

I hope everything will get better.

~Alli~

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

5 posted 2006-10-01 05:56 PM

This was very touching . Keep up the wonderful writes.
There are plenty of people here at PiP willing to listen if you want to talk.

HOpe you feel better soon

Brittany
Junior Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 32
Canada

6 posted 2006-10-01 07:04 PM

"tomorrow I could feel normal,
and act just like I used to,
or I could be as bad as now,
my thoughts and feelings askew,
and hurt for no reason like I always do."

This was my favourite part, especially that last two lines. I love the way you write, you capture the feeling and emotions perfectly, and your poems are always awesome. I think this is one that a lot of people can relate to, including myself.

~Life Ain't Always Beautiful~

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

7 posted 2006-10-01 07:15 PM

exactly how i feel just a few days ago i was happy... now that feeling has disolved away

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