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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
i rote this poem on october the 8th of 2007 few months ago fall has come by i could feel all the loneliness that surrounds me me walking alone looking at the leaves of the trees i still haven't forgetten you me just spending time alone sometimes it seems like your beside me then winter has come by it got bitter cold no life around it seems like the world has shut down its only white and snowy but no colors so deep into my memories that i don't know what's going on around me i am in my little world that i just set up for me and you then spring came by everything became full of life everything became green looks like all the people are happy but not me it seems like i stand out all alone from the crowd then summer came by everyone becaem energetic but it really doesn't make a difference everyone going on vacations having fun but for me i am still grieving over my lost love what difference does it make every season passes by but i still feel the same way i always have faith to see my lost love but i cant believe all those seasons i have always loved you but you never showed up every season passes by a year and i still feel alone no one to support me no one to talk to guess what you made me feel this way seasons pass by without knowing it once i have no clue wut im doing whereever u r i will always love you |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
wow that was deep i know that feeling and i love how u wrote it in each season that was cool nice poem |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
thanks oh yea i gave u my hotmail and now u give me urs ok thanks really appreciated u think my style of riting is different from other ppl |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
yeah i think its diff from the ones ive seen on here i think i like yours tho better cuz its... better i think love the way u write |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
thanks oh yea i added u in my library lol but we have been chatting all over the place so lets chat on msn or either aim lol |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
lol yeah ok |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
so will u give me ur msn rite now oh yea i submitted a new poem its called im starting to love you more so plz read that one lol dont forget to give me ur msn |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
and alos ppl say that i have a creative mind lol but when it was last year i thought that i was a bad poet lol but i never knew i rite good lol |
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