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PrestonThePoet
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since 2007-11-07
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0 posted 2007-11-12 10:18 PM


As your harsh words reverberate through the hallways in my mind,
I’m sparked with a question, Deep within me.
Do you even care? Or are you just here because you have to be.
I’m at the top of your “to do list.” But never accomplished;
You were the one who brought me here. Yet, you can’t grasp it.
I won’t be happy till all of this is figured out.
If you want to leave me here, Let me be free.
Be my guest. You’re not helping either way.
Can I just breathe easy? If only just for one day?


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prettypinkrebel
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1 posted 2007-11-12 10:58 PM


Short to the point and full of emotion...love it! great to expand if needed as well
great write ! :]

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

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