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Teen Poetry #8

Breathe

Alaina
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since 2007-06-16

Posts 106

0 posted 2007-11-02 11:46 PM

this was just something i wrote really quick, i'm going to try to add more on to it but let me know what you think of the beginning

I breathe in and out,
The smoke becomes one with the air
And I see how beautiful the world can be.
A little piece of me becoming part of you
Breathe in what I breathe out
And listen to the air as it zips by
I hope when you hear that
You remember my breath floating into the air
And know that when you’re breathing in
You’re breathing me in

I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine?
-Eddie Vedder

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